Anecdotes from the Studio: Words that Won
A client’s product page said “premium shelves” and stalled. We rewrote to “hand-rubbed white oak with chamfered edges and hidden brackets,” then explained load capacity. Inquiries rose, and customers referenced those exact details in emails.
Anecdotes from the Studio: Words that Won
We replaced “features” with “frames” to describe a window seat: “A slim oak lip frames morning coffee.” That single verb helped readers picture themselves there. Ask your audience which verbs they’d like a mini list for.